上海查字典中考网10月9日：中考英语作文一直是考生们难以准确掌握分数的考题之一，如何有效的根据英语作文的评分标准来有效的提高英语作文的成绩？下面，由吴争老师为我们进行讲解中考英语作文的评分标准。
官方评分标准
8＋8＋4
内容分8分。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚，完整.
语言分8分。学生需用语规范，表达准确，无或少见语法错误，词汇拼写正确，句型使用恰当。首先是字数，少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。其次是语法和拼写错误，每个扣0.5，动词重要大错误扣1-2分，重复错误不计；标点错误每4个扣0.5.
组织结构分4分，也就是我们常说的文采分。根据学生使用复杂句型/单词和谚语/俗语的情况来加分。
（每次考试可能按照对扣分情况做微调，但总体8+8+4原则不变）
实际评分标准
1.Globalscoring整体评分
很多老师其实不是每个部分分项评分，很多情况时阅读完第一句第二句在脑海里给出一个大致的该学生的起评点，12+，15+10+
首句很重要，首句以及后面的一句会对该起评点多少有一定作用
2.字数问题：80-90最佳105以上啰嗦/心情烦躁/影响评分60字以下/直接扣内容分扣分3-4分
（个人觉得中考写作要把握止损原则，不要一畏多写，首先中考试卷部分大致格子加上利用空隙最大程度只能完成115字左右，其实从来也没有老师因为你多写而给你额外分数，在完成写作后，多写只能增加失误错误的可能性）
3.要点问题：根据要求如果以下要点仅供参考，不包括不会直接扣分。不要受到要点干扰
实际考生中，不包括任何一条得高分非常少。
所谓GuidedWriting提示，给学生扩展思路
中考／高卡/四六级作文都是guidedWriting
中考作文内容有时候相似与雅思口语Part2topicCard
4.特殊案例白卷０分与本文无任何关系的作文６分为最高分（这点每年考试也会有微调）
5.总体印象分是一把双刃剑。不能为了写总体印象分，用所谓难词，结果发生语法错误，扣语言分，还要扣总体印象分。
何为总体印象分
有气势，有腔调，适合中学老师口味，不能高于他们的认知标准
10年前when I was five, I listened to radio.
5年前try to do sth , stop doing
现在的形势 I am a boy who is keen on music
Do all the possible means to do sth
Certainly, I will
For the reason that
Only by .can we
I am deeply convinced that
Take up painting
6.一模二模考试写作满分情况比较少，一般中考一模二模会比中考真题批分相对严格
评卷流程：
电脑阅卷2人一组组长台上监控两人分值不能相差太大4分？（仅供参考）超过额定分值退回重新批改（仅供参考）
阅卷速度其实阅卷者每天有一定的阅卷量，真正停留在每个考生的阅卷时间其实还是有限的，但一定是充足的。教师每天在完成大量阅卷工作后，也会有一定的审美疲劳，所以首句一定要。。。大家懂得（个人意见，供参考）
教师实际阅卷重点：
首句。首句出错，印象非常糟糕
连接词/逻辑
未句
内容/例子
模版使用/套题
Write at least 60 words about the topic My plan for
图片省略
School activity/high school study/summer holidays future job
Use the following points as a reference.(以下问题仅供参考)
What is your plan about ? What have you planned ?
Why do you have such a plan? How are you going to do it ?
What result do you expect?
My plan for the summer holidays
I am a girl who is keen on travelling. As a junior three student, I dont have too much spare time now , so I want to go travelling during my summer holidays. For me, Ive planned to go to Japan, simply because travelling can broaden my horizon, cultivate my interest and enrich my life. Whats more, I can make a large circle of friends there. I am going to get ready for this travelling . I hope that my summer holidays will be meaningful and colorful.
(8+8+3)=19
My plan for future job
According to my mother A good job makes people confident. I think so. I want to be an engineer, because if I see my own building , I will be proud of myself. But there is a saying No pains, no gains. So is my point. First , it is important that I should learn physics well. Then I should collect different experice. Finally confidence must be full of my heart. To cut a long story, the harder I get, the shorter between facts and goal.
(7+7+1)
教学分享
1．话题整合
旅游（个人兴趣类）myhobby/atripwithmyfamily/myplan/Myweekend
学习类（最好的学习方法）studybringsmehappiness/Themostboringsubject
科技环保类（水资源保护）computerhavechangedmylife/waterresource
个人经历类（考试失败/最难忘的事情/毕业感言/我和她friendsh/thefirsttimeIfailed
感恩，抒情类（未来２个月打算/毕业话语）Mydream
2011年作文：I am a member of ..
2010年作文：I am proud of myself
2009年作文：Iwanttodosthformyschool
2008年作文：Lovearoundme
2007年作文：ThingsIhatetodo
2006年作文：Ihaveadream
2005年作文：Growing pain sand gains
2004年作文：Leaving School
2.合理正确使用模版
一个模板原创者使用超高分
一个模板十几个人使用高分
一个模板几百个人使用平庸
模板句行云流水非模板句一天世界超低分
阅卷教师不会因为使用模版直接扣分，但是如果模版句子很流畅，非模版句子很差，我们可以以memorized answer/句子逻辑链接问题扣分
3.关注高分范文的共性
用词多样性an increasing number of students
避免单一句型
Ｉam Tony.I am aboy.Iam sixteen.X
连接词，逻辑清晰
For instance,therefore,besides,
亮点句型never fail to
4.一定要真正学会使用语法，避免输出时出错
There are many things I hate to do, such as: reading boring books,go to bed early and so on. I hate to read boring books because I thinkit spendme much time, so I dont like to read them. I hate to go to bed early because I want to watch more TV, I want play more computer games.
5.语料库的事先储备
Travelling can broaden my horizon, cultivate my interest, enrich my life.
I would like to extend my deepest appreciation towards those who
In order to improve my English , I read English newspapers, watch CCTV English channel and listen to some English songs.
Some steps should be taken .
Sample Answer
The best teacher I know
During my English learning journey ,I have met a great many teachers. However, among them, Mr.Liu, in my mind , never fails to fascinate me. For instance, in order to help us memorize some words better, he often tells us a large number of funny stories about them. Besides ,when I feel sad or unhappy , he can be a very good listener to comfort me. Here I would like to express my deepest appreciation towards him. To sum up, Mr. Liu is the best teacher I Know.
I am a member of reading club
When I was only a little girl, I took up reading as my hobby. Now Im a member of a reading club. Im very glad about it. All of the members share our own books with each other. Even if we read the books from morning till night, we never get tired of reading. We enjoy ourselves all the time. In my opinion, reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body. To be such a member makes my life more and more colourful.
文章来源：昂立外语中高考英语专家吴争（由于写作部分一些情况比较敏感，本人的内容仅供参考，每年中考的阅卷情况也会有一些微调，本作者为此不承担因此发生的任何责任，谢谢理解）
2.合理正确使用模版
一个模板原创者使用超高分
一个模板十几个人使用高分
一个模板几百个人使用平庸
模板句行云流水非模板句一天世界超低分
阅卷教师不会因为使用模版直接扣分，但是如果模版句子很流畅，非模版句子很差，我们可以以memorized answer/句子逻辑链接问题扣分
3.关注高分范文的共性
用词多样性an increasing number of students
避免单一句型
Ｉam Tony.I am aboy.Iam sixteen.X
连接词，逻辑清晰
For instance,therefore,besides,
亮点句型never fail to
4.一定要真正学会使用语法，避免输出时出错
There are many things I hate to do, such as: reading boring books,go to bed early and so on. I hate to read boring books because I thinkit spendme much time, so I dont like to read them. I hate to go to bed early because I want to watch more TV, I want play more computer games.
5.语料库的事先储备
Travelling can broaden my horizon, cultivate my interest, enrich my life.
I would like to extend my deepest appreciation towards those who
In order to improve my English , I read English newspapers, watch CCTV English channel and listen to some English songs.
Some steps should be taken .
Sample Answer
The best teacher I know
During my English learning journey ,I have met a great many teachers. However, among them, Mr.Liu, in my mind , never fails to fascinate me. For instance, in order to help us memorize some words better, he often tells us a large number of funny stories about them. Besides ,when I feel sad or unhappy , he can be a very good listener to comfort me. Here I would like to express my deepest appreciation towards him. To sum up, Mr. Liu is the best teacher I Know.
I am a member of reading club
When I was only a little girl, I took up reading as my hobby. Now Im a member of a reading club. Im very glad about it. All of the members share our own books with each other. Even if we read the books from morning till night, we never get tired of reading. We enjoy ourselves all the time. In my opinion, reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body. To be such a member makes my life more and more colourful.
文章来源：昂立外语中高考英语专家吴争（由于写作部分一些情况比较敏感，本人的内容仅供参考，每年中考的阅卷情况也会有一些微调，本作者为此不承担因此发生的任何责任，谢谢理解）